My dreams shall shape my future and help me understand that the world I live in is a simulation.
I sprinkled my tears along the edges of your bed
but did you even notice the stain they left?
I sewed my name on the side of the mattress
and dotted the i with blood
but did you notice the red where you lay your head?
My name will forever haunt you
Some never see, never appreciate when you give them your all. Hopefully it will come back to “haunt” them. Excellent capture, Bradley.
Indeed, Ginny! I don’t think they’ll ever wake up either. Thank you, love! 🙂
nice bradley…love the embroided name with the i dotted in blood and how that too points to the spot by where they lay their head…nice piece man…
Thank you, Brian! Hopefully they’ll see you exist once your name is pushed in front of them in red. If they don’t, burn them while they rest in bed. I can smell the charred corpse.
Bradley, love the sprinkled tears and the embroided name with the i dotted in blood ..the pain raw..very nice!
Thank you so much, Ayala! Your name sewn with a hint of blood in the bed should get them to see clearly. If not, it’s over.
You know how good it is to see someone with real talent develop? Wow Bradley I’ve seen our work mature so much in the past 12 months. This was the less is more style I love so much xx
Thank you so much for the lovely comment, Shân! I’ve been writing more less is more style poems lately. I’m so glad you stopped by! :heart: 😀
LOVE this Bradley! The red where you lay your head? Wicked weave!
Thank you, sweetie! :heart: 😀
damn. just damn. that’ll slap you around a bit. Very good.
Hello Mark! Thank you for stopping by, and thank you for your kind comment! 😀
I noted the red stain on the mattress ~ Nice to meet you at D’verse ~
Nice to meet you, Heaven! 😀
Bradley, I too love the embroidery intertwined in your words. Sometimes we sacrifice everything and it still isn’t noticed!
Thank you, Andy! I agree completely!
Sad, but true…there’s no guarantee with love…passion spent…and sometimes little return. Very well imaged, Brad. Like it!
Very true, Jacqueline. I’m glad you stopped by, love. Thank you! :heart: 🙂
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